1. that-what　　 2. nerve--- nervous　 3. the 去掉　

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It is important to know that a parent should do to help reduce children’s stress. If you notice that your child is becoming nerve, he may have problems at the school. He may has trouble sleep. He may be depressing but begin to suffer from headaches. In this case, you should talk him to try to discover the causes of her stress. You should spend extra time helping him. In short, you need to be complete supportive and encouraging all the time.

短文改错：

76. 英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

16.哈师大附中高三上学期第一次月考

第一节：短文改错 (共10小题，每小题1分, 满分10分)

84.　 What → How　 85. which→ that

80. strong　 → strongly　 81. too → so　　 82.　 drop of/ of →that　 　83. live → living　

76. drop a　 77. have 后加 been / have →was　 78. was → were 79. Though → However

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Abby,

　　　　 How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you. I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia. Lots of students took exams for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them.Though, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my going there. They think it is too far away that they will not see me all the year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely. They can’t imagine so young a girl live alone. They advise me to study at a local university instead. Then I’ll be able to continue living with them. What can I persuade them to accept the fact which I have grown up?

Best wishes,

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Jane

第一节　 ：短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

15. 哈三中2009--2010学年度上学期高三学年九月月考

第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。　

Walter's goa1 in life was become a successfully doctor．He knew he had to finish high school first, so he put his heart into his study-in particular, biology, chemistry, and maths．Because he worked hard at these subjects, Walter became good at it．However, Walter forgot that he needed to master some other subjects besides those he had been chosen．As a result, Walter fails both English and Latin in the end of the second school year．But he had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graduate as planning．Walter learned good lesson.

短文改错：

Walter’s goal in life was ∧ become a successfully doctor．He knew he

　　　　　　　　　　 to　　　　　 successful

had to finish high school first, so he put his heart into his study-in particular,

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 studies

biology, chemistry, and maths．Because he worked hard at these subjects,

Walter became good at it．However, Walter forgot that he needed to master

them

some other subjects besides those he had been chosen．As a result, Walter

fails both English and Latin in the end of the second school year．But he

failed　　　　　　　　　 at　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 So

had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graduate as planning．

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 planned

Walter learned ∧good lesson.

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