3. 删去more。第一次告诉 Bob 关于自己的一些事情， 此处用 more 不合逻辑。

2. to 后加 be 或 become。

1. learn 改为 learnt或learned。

2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第ll处起)不计分。

Dear Bob,

Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country. First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I studied at Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look forward to hear from you soon.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

Yours, Li Hua

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答案及解析

33. 2010-2011学年第一学期浙江钱高、灵二高联考试卷

第一节：短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分l0分)

　 　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

64．Of去掉　 65正确

62．Advices改为advice　　 63．Replying改为replied

59．them 改为it60．Before改为After　　 61．His改为whose

32. 昆明一中2011届高三年级第二次月考

My English teacher was always too absorbed in the text being　　　 　　 56．　　　　

studied that he never looked u^．He had habit of asking a．　　　 　　 57．　　　　

student to translate the text, and he often choose the same　　　　 　　 58．　　　　

student without realizing them! himself, The student ．out 　　　　　　 59．　　　　

of respect, didn't point it out．Before being called so many　　 　　　　　　 60．　　　　

times, the student, his name was Jack, had to ask his friends　　　 　　 61．　　　　

for advices．The next day when the teacher asked Jack to　　 　　　　　　　 62．　　　　

translate the text, Jack replying, "He is absent today,　　　　　　 　　 63．　　　　

because of he has a sick sister to look after at home．　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 64．　　　　

"All right," said the teacher, "-you translate the text."　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 65; ．　　　　

5 6．Too改为so　 57．在had后加a　　 58．choose 改为chose

76.held前加be　 　　77.from改为at　 　78.去掉next前的the　 79.singing改为sung　 80.either改为too　 　81.his改为their　 　82.wonderfully改为wonderful

83 attending改为attend　 　　　84.√　 　85.improve改为improved