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　 A man was setting out to visit one of his friend early in the morning.　　　 1.　　　　　

He brought some cakes with him for the lunch. When he was walking　　　　 2.　　　　　

on the road, he thought, “My friend is sure to give me a nice breakfast.” 　　 3.　　　　　

He threw away his cakes on the road for he wanted to walk fast .He　　　　　　 4.　　　　　

went on and at last he came into a river. To his surprise, the river 　　　　　　　 5.　　　　　

became very wide and he could cross it. He had to wait for a boat.　　　　　　　 6.　　　　　

When the sun was beginning to set, there were no any boats, so he had　　　　 7.　　　　　

to come . He walked and walked and he felt more and more hungry.　　　　　　 8.　　　　　

Suddenly he found the cakes by the road. He picked them up and　　　　　　　　 9.　　　　　

eat them with great difficulty.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 10　　　　　

10．tells→says

9．a去掉，因为Alice刚来，所以，她的朋友不多

7．lives→is . far是形容词，要和助动词be连用

6．lives→live. 前面已有助动词does, 所以lives要改成原形live

5．still后加a

4．find→found.时态不对

3．First→One

2．the去掉

1．me→mine