Question

情景作文（10分）

Tom 要到中国来读书，想住在一个中国人的家里，更好地体验中国中学生的生活。请你写一篇短文向他介绍你自己，你的家人和你的房间。

注意：1.分三个方面介绍。

2.重点介绍你的房间布置，例举3件左右的东西的布置。

3.字数：50左右。

4.文章中不得出现真实的人名，班名和校名。

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Answer 1

I am a student .I am thirteen years old.I like basketball.My school is very beautiful.There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and I . My father is a doctor. He works very hard. He goes to work on foot everyday. My father is not very tall, but he is strong, he is very kind to his patients and he loves his work.My mother is a teacher. She works in a middle school . She goes to work by car. She is a very good teacher in my eyes. My room has a computer,By computer is a bed and a desk,On top of the desk is a bookshelf,in the house of the a air conditioner.This is my home

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们介绍自己，自己的房间。文章需要我们介绍三个主要部分，一，介绍我自己,这部分我们可以简单介绍自己的年龄，爱好。二，介绍我的家庭，家庭成员以及他们的基本情况。三，介绍自己的房间布置，至少三样物品。写作时注意用我们平时所学的简单句，合理运用平时所学的描述人的形容词，注意文章的连贯性。

【亮点说明】这是一篇很不错的文章，文章准确的完成题目要求，特别是在介绍自己的房间时运用倒装句，By computer is a bed and a desk,On top of the desk is a bookshelf,in the house of the a air conditioner.This is my home，使文章不再单一枯燥，使文章焕然一新。