Question

14．临近毕业，学校要求每个初三学生写封信给各个家长，简要汇报三年来初中生活的收获与存在问题．假如你是Jim，请根据下表的内容提示，用英文做一个简短的汇报．

收  获	1．学到很多知识，提高了学习技能． 2．了解到许多名人及他们的事迹．（举1-2个例子，参考人名：Spud，Tan Dun，Armstrong，Marie Curie，Audrey Hepburn…） 3．学会做人：在校与老师、同学和睦相处，互相帮助；在家…；在上学途中，遵守交通规则，能…；遇到困难时，能…
存在问题	学习压力（feel stressed in…）大，…（举1-2个例子）
目前想法	1．感谢… 2．打算（怎样处理存在的问题）

要    求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等．
Dear Dad & Mum，
I will leave junior school and meet a new challenge of my life．Now I would like tell you what I have done in the past three years．
                                                                  
Yours Sincerely
Jim．

Answer 1

分析 ①高分句型：Now I would like to tell you what I have learnt in the past three years．现在我想告诉你在过去的三年里我所学到的东西．句子中would like to do sth想做某事，what I have learnt 在这里作tell的宾语，构成宾语从句，in the past three years在过去的三年里．
②I have too much homework to do every day每天我有太多的作业要做．句子中too much太多，修饰不可数名词homework，to do作后置定语，修饰homework，every day每天．

解答 Dear Dad & Mum，
I will leave junior school and meet a new challenge of my life．Now I would like to tell you what I have learnt in the past three years．（高分句型）（引出话题）
I have learnt a lot of knowledge from the books and I have improved my study skills．I have learnt a lot of famous people all over the world．Spud's story tells us not to give up when we do anything．（Tan Dun is a great musician．He said his music is to dream without boundaries．）I can also get along with my teachers and classmates．We learn from each other and help each other，too．At home I can do some housework so that you can have more time to rest．On my way to school，I can obey the traffic rules．I can help old men cross the road．When I meet difficulty，I can talk to my friends/teachers/you about it．（在校收获）
Now I feel stressed in my study．I can't get enough sleep．I have too much homework to do every day．（高分句型）I have no time for my hobbies．（存在问题）
would thank you for taking good care of me and thank my teachers and friends for their help．I will plan my time well to study better and sleep well/make my study and my body better．（目前想法）
Yours Sincerely
Jim

点评 写作时要注意遣词造句，不能受汉语的影响，要用地道的英语表达，注意时态，语态，单词拼写，语法等问题，用好简单句，适当用复杂句．可以用一些高级词汇．还要注意句子的关联．另外这篇文章还有要求写出自己的感受，这是开放的部分，要学生自己展开想象，组织语言，给出理由．