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15．俗话说"眼睛是心灵的窗户"，可现如今，眼睛健康的人却越来越少．请你根据提示以"How to protect your eyesight"为题，用英语写一篇短文来谈谈如何保护视力．
How to protect your eyesight
●Don't use your eyes for a long time．
●Don't read in the sun．
●Do eye exercises．
●Eat more fruit，vegetables and seafood．
…．．
…．．
要求：1根据提示先补充至少两种保护视力的方法，然后再进行写作；
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How to protect your eyesight
As we all know，eyes are very important．So it is necessary for everyone to look after their eyesight．But do you know how to protect your eyesight？
                                                                
If you obey the rules above，I think you may be able to protect your eyesight．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
①You'd better give them a rest②after studying for an hour．最好学习一小时后让眼睛休息一下．
①had better do sth 最好做某事
②after引导的时间状语从句，主语you和主句一致，故省略，后加动名词结构．
【高分句型二】
Sixth，①keep ②as far away from mobile phones，iPads and computers as possible六，尽可能的远离手机，ipad，和电脑．
①keep away from远离
②as…as possible尽可能的…

解答 How to Protect Your Eyesight．
As we all know，eyes are very important．So it is necessary for everyone to look after their eyesight．But do you know how to protect your eyesight？
First，don't use your eyes for a long time．（用眼不要太久）You'd better give them a rest after studying for an hour．【高分句型一】Second，don't read in the sun or in a poor light．Don't read in bed，either．（太阳下不要看书）When you read you should keep the book about 30cm away from your eyes．Third，do eye exercises every day．（做眼保健操）Fourth，eat more fruit，vegetables and seafood．（多吃水果蔬菜和海产品）Fifth，get enough sleep．You should sleep at least 8 hours every night．（充足睡眠）Sixth，keep as far away from mobile phones，iPads and computers as possible．【高分句型二】（远离电子产品）
If you obey the rules above，I think you may be able to protect your eyesight

点评 动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上．