Question

【题目】书面表达

111.假如你是李梅,想邀请英国交流生Kitty来你家。根据下面提供的信息，用英语写一封邀请信。

要点：

位置	新家位于镇中心
环境	空气清新，鸟语花香
邻居	友好善良,乐于助人……（补充一点）
可做的事情	去博物馆看精美的艺术品和中国画 ……（补充一点）
路线	沿着花园路走（Garden Road），在第二个十字路口向右拐，你会看见我家在你前面。

要求：不要逐句翻译，包含所有要点，注意格式，字数80左右。

Dear Kitty,

I would like to invite you to my new home.

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The neighbours _____________________________________________________________

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This is the way to my home. __________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Mei

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Kitty,

I would like to invite you to my new home. I’ll show you around my hometown first. My home is in the town centre. There are many flowers and trees around it. I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing every day.

The neighbours are kind and friendly. They often help us with all kinds of problems. People often have sports together in the park. People here are like a big family. There are many things to do in my hometown. There are many fine works of art and Chinese paintings in the museum. If you want to enjoy watching opera, you can go to the local theatre. Welcome to my home. I am looking forward to meeting you soon.

This is the way to my home. Take the bus to the town centre. Walk along Garden Street,and take the second turning on the right. My home is in front of you.

Yours,

Li Mei

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。所给材料内容比较详细，层次清楚，我们要做的就是用英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点: 这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上使用了简单句和复合句，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，文章还使用了一些常用的句式、短语，这为文章增添了文采和层次感。