Question

17．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．
注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．
Mr．Brown lived in a house less than two miles from his office，so he was able to drive home every day for lunch．Every time he drove home at noon，he found many cars were parked outside his house and there was no room for his own car．He had to drive somewhere else to park his car．Then he had to walk back home．This made him very angry．
He had put up a board，which said，"No parking"in the garden facing the road，but nobody noticed it．People seemed to obey（遵守） only a police notice ，but not a private one．There were no parked cars where there was a blue board with letters on it：Police Notice--No Parking!
Mrs．Brown suggested that he could steal a police notice．He dared not，being afraid of going to prison．She then suggested that he could make one just like a police notice．He said he was not a policeman and couldn't use the word"police"．Several days later，Mr．Brown made a blue board with white letters：
Polite Notice--No Parking!
"Oh!"Mrs．Brown said，"You told me you weren't going to use the word"police"，but why do you use it now？""Really？"he asked，"Look again．"She started to laugh．"You are really clever．"

Paragraph 1：
Why did Mrs Brown say her husband was really rather clever？Because she found that he had written a notice which looked exactly like a police notice．He made a blue board with white letters on it，but it was not a real one．Being afraid of going to prison，Mr Brown certainly dared not use the word"police"，but he used"polite notice"instead of"police notice"．He was quite clever，wasn't he？
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If the police discovered that the Browns were using a police notice…they would feel angry and punish them．It was a crime because he offended the police，passing himself off as a policeman．But Mr Brown would remain very calm and ask the policemen to look at the board carefully．The policemen would burst out laughing when they realized what had happened．．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
Being afraid of going to prison，Mr Brown certainly dared not use the word"police"，but he used"polite notice"instead of"police notice
警察会大笑，当他们意识到发生了什么事（高分句型一）．．
高分句型二：
The policemen would burst out laughing when they realized what had happened．
警察会大笑，当他们意识到发生了什么事（高分句型一）．．

解答 Why did Mrs Brown say her husband was really rather clever？Because she found that he had written a notice which looked exactly like a police notice．He made a blue board with white letters on it，but it was not a real one．Being afraid of going to prison，Mr Brown certainly dared not use the word"police"，but he used"polite notice"instead of"police notice"（高分句型一）．He was quite clever，wasn't he？
If the police discovered that the Browns were using a police notice，they would feel angry and punish them．It was a crime because he offended the police，passing himself off as a policeman．But Mr Brown would remain very calm and ask the policemen to look at the board carefully．警察会大笑，当他们意识到发生了什么事（高分句型一）（高分句型一）．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．