1.信的开头和结尾已给出。

3.用好并列句中的并列连词(常用：and, but, however, nevertheless, while(而)，or, otherwise, for, so, therefore，not only…, but also…, either…, or…, both…, and…, etc)

请从引导词或过渡词的角度分析以下范文的的连贯性。并在横线上或括号中填适当的词。

Sentence 1.__________________________________.

Sentence 2.__________________________________.(　　　　　 )句1与句2之间的过渡词。

Sentence 3.__________________________________.(　　　　　 ) 句2与句3之间的过渡词。

Sentence 4.__________________________________.(　　　　　 ) 句3与句4之间的过渡词。

Sentence 5.__________________________________.(　　 　　　) 句4与句5之间的过渡词。

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　<Key9>

假设你是杜丽，你马上工填报高考志愿了，现在你基本上目标已锁定两间大学作为笫一志愿， 但各有优缺点。潘老师是你最喜欢的老师之一，请用英语以书信形式向他咨询意见。下表是两间大学的一些相关情况。

[写作要求]

2.尽量用好句子与句子之间的过渡词(常用连接词：and, but, therefore, however, what’s more, besides, in addition, as a result, Firstly, secondly, for example, etc.)。

1.前后句应有一定的逻辑性(一般可以按给出的句子、列举的要点、提供的图片者或表格的栏目顺序)。

2.据要表达的内容自己重新组织安排要点，尤其是表格题。

Example 1.(From潮州市质量检测卷)，将笫一，笫二句合成一个要点。“梅州市位于广东东北部。总人口491万(2003年)。”写成：“Meizhou City is situated in the northeast of Guangdong Province with a population of 4.91 million.”

Example 2.

(From潮州市质量检测卷)

将笫四句拆分成二个句子。“客家人的祖先源自中原, 素来崇文重教。”写成“The ancestors of Hakkas migrated southward from Central China. 　Education has always been regarded as an important matter in the hakka community.”

Example 3：笫四部分表格中，“车程所需时间”一栏，用一个句子(However, it takes 1 hour to go to Zhongshan University by bus while only 20 minutes to Jinan University.)，而“课程设置”一栏却拆分成二个句子(What’s more, in Zhongshan University, all the courses are taught in Chinese as well as English. Compared to this, English is the only language used in Jinan University)

附：07潮州市质量检测卷:

梅州市位于广东东北部。总人口491万人(2003年)。梅州市是著名的世界客都。客家人的祖先源自中原, 素来崇文重教。客家人行走天下，移民世界，且在海内外商界不乏成功者，因此有“东方犹太人”之称。

Meizhou City is situated in the northeast of Guangdong Province with a population of 4.91 million. It is the biggest of the Hakkas community in the country known as the Capital of hakkas. The ancestors of Hakkas migrated southward from Central China. Education has always been regarded as an important matter in the hakka community. Because of the Hakkas’ successes in business worldwide, they are regarded as Oriental Jews.

Looking forward to seeing you,.

Li 　Hua

　　 (　 2006-2007学年度第一学期潮州市高三期末教学质量检测, 收集于东莞教研网)

拆分原则：有利于句子表达、保证内容完整。

1.尽量利用好原材料的要点信息(按序给出的句子、列举的要点或提供的图片)，以便节省时间。

1.　　　　 如果是简单句，句子结构是否符合简单句的5种基本结构。哪5种？

1),_________2),_________3),________4),_______5),________

(Key 1)

请从简单句的基本结构分析并找出下列句子中的错误(注意谓语部分)。

a. I afraid that I can’t pass the exam.

b. Most students against buying gate tickets when entering the park.

c. My favourite subjects including English and Chinese.

2.　　　　 如果是复合句，句子结构是否符合复合句的相关结构。

什么是复合句？_______________________________________(Key 2)

英语写作中常的复合句有：

A.名词性从句，包括1),_________2),_________3),________4),_______ (Key 3)

●常用的引导名词性从句的引导词：____________________________________________等。(Key 4)

●特别注意不要将that 和what混用，该如何区别？_____________________________(Key 5)

用that 和what填空。

1.It worried her a bit ____ her hair was turning grey.

2._____ I need is more time.

3.My brother isn’t ___ he used to be.

4.____ he has become a rich man is known to all in our town. (Key 6)

B. 定语从句(常用关系代词：which…, that…, who…, whom…..,whose…, when…, where…, why…等)

C. 状语从句(常用引导词：when, where, before, after, because, so that, if , though, although, as if , as though, unless, as soon as, once…等)

●使用复合句时，注意引导词的运用。注意下列句中划线部分的错误。

a. Before went to bed, I used to watch TV for a while.

b. Though English is hard to learn, but I’ve managed to learn it well.

c. When stayed in the country , I made a foreign friend.

1.如果是并列句，检查并列连词(常用：and, but, however, nevertheless, while(而)，or, otherwise, for, so, therefore, not only…but also…, either… or…, both…and…, etc)是否使用正确，并列结构的主语和谓语有没有混用。

1).并列句与复合句的区别：(在括号内填上并列名或复合句)

a. Though English is difficult to learn, I’ve managed to learn it well.(　　　 )

b. English is difficult to learn, but I’ve managed to learn it well. (　　 　)　　 <Key7>

(并列句是句与句之间的并列，对等，平行关系；复合句是包含与被包含的关系，即：主句包含从句、从句被主句包含)

2.在基础写作中，祈使句和感叹句用得比较少， 但如使用，必须做到结构正确(祈使句常以动词原形开头，e.g. Finish your homework quickly. Don’t eat snacks in the class.)如果是感叹句，请正确使用how , what　 e.g. How hard our English monitor studies!　 What a hard-working girl our English monitor is!

　　 ●试分析以下5个句子是否结构准确， 并找出句中的一处错误，在错误之处划线，并改正在后面横线上。

1.I’m Lu Shumin, and born in Dongguan in August 1988. 　　　　__________________

此句结构为：_______________________________________

2.From 1994 to 2000，I studied in Dalang Primary school , going to Donghua Middle School of Dongguan the following one year, then I came to study in New Star School 5 years ago.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　__________________

此句结构为：_______________________________________

3.The main subjects included Chinese, maths, English, physics, politics, chemistry and computer that I studied at school.　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　__________________

此句结构为：_______________________________________

4.I like English and piano best or I am very good at them.

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　__________________

此句结构为：_______________________________________

5. In my spare time, not only do I enjoy listening to music, playing piano, but also I love driving a car.　　　　　　　　　　 __________________

此句结构为：_______________________________________

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　<Key8>

　I am in great need of your help. I am filling in my wills about universities soon, including my faviourite Zhongshan University, but I am wondering which one should be put first. The former one recruits more students than the latter one, which seems to give me more hope to go there. However, it takes 1 hour to go to Zhongshan University by bus while only 20 minutes to Jinan University. What’s more, in Zhongshan University, all the courses are taught in Chinese as well as English. Compared to this, English is the only language used in Jinan University.

Looking forward to your advice and thank you very much.

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Yours truly,

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　Du Li

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (07潮州市质量检测卷, 收集于东莞教研网)

学生判断所读内容优劣的依据是：2007年《考试大纲说明》对基础写作的要求：1.句子结构准确 2.内容完整、连贯3.________(笫3点不属于《考试大纲说明》中的内容，但学生应自主猜测(内容为“卷面整洁” )

1 We’ve chatted online for some time but we have never met ___________.

2 It is nearly 11 o’clock yet he is not back. His mother ____________ him.

3 The Lius ___________ hard times before liberation.

4 ____________ get a good mark I worked very hard before the exam.

5 I think the window was broken ___________ by someone.

6 You should ___________ the language points on the blackboard. They are useful.

7 They met at Tom’s party and later on ____________ with each other.

8 You can find ____________ English reading materials in the school library.

9 I am easy to be with and _____________my classmates pretty well.

10 They __________ in a small village so that they might not be found.

11 Which of the following statements is not right ____________ the above passage?

12 It’s getting dark. I ___________ be off now.

13 More than 1,000 workers ___________ the general strike last week.

14 All her earnings _____________ about 3,000 yuan per month.

1 A group of Frenchmen and _________ are visiting Window to the World.

2 Please wait in line. Everyone will get his ________.

3 The doorknob (门把手) has come _________. Who will fix it?

4 Don’t always stay indoors. You’d better go __________ for fun time.

5 I once studied some Japanese at college, but I’m afraid that I’ve __________ forgotton it now.

6 Don’t scold him. After all, he is only a __________.

7 __________ often follows lightning.

8 People say that __________ is second nature.

9 China is going through good economic __________ these years.

10 Since you have question, why not turn to him for some __________?

11 My child spends most of the time playing online games. It really _________ me.

12 ___________ well with others is considered a kind of ability.

13 Seeing mother smiling at me among the audience, I felt _________ on the stage.

14 No one knew the __________ why he was absent from class a second time.

15 Seeing the famous film star appearing, all the fans became _________.

16 Do you know when President George Bush came into _________ ?

17 I __________ from a bad cold the other day. It took me days to get rid of it.

18 Only a few years after graduation my sister became the chief _________ with China Daily.

19 Can you design a ____________ to find out what kinds of friends your classmates like to make?

20 He is your father. How __________ you say to him like that?

21 Little Peter always lies to others. His classamtes won’t _________ him anymore.

22 Mrs Wang wrote on the blackboard: No _________ in exams!

23 Mary got very unhappy, for other friends __________ her at the party.

24 I got 90 __________ in the final English exam.

25 Before going shopping you’d better make a _______of what you are going to buy.