(一)、小汽车开始进入中国的普通家庭，带来了方便和舒适，同时也带来了交通和污染。谈谈你的看法。(关键词：private care, afford a car, claim, advantages, traffic jams, hold up, poisonous gas, give off, object to)

　 作文范文：

　　　 With the increase in the general standard of living， some ordinary Chinese families begin to afford a car. Yet opinions of the development of a private car vary from person to person.

　　　 Some claim that there are many advantages in possessing a car. It gives a much greater degree of comfort and mobility. The owner of a car is no longer forced to rely on public transport， and buses or taxies. With a car he can go where he likes and when he wants， so much so that he can enjoy his leisure to the full by making trips to the country or seaside on the weekends， instead of being confined to his immediate neighborhood.

　　　　　　　 However， others strongly object to developing private cars. They maintain that as more and more cars are produced and run in the street， a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off， polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. In fact， private cars contribute to traffic congestion so greatly that advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams.

　　　　　　　 Whether private cars should be developed in China is a difficult question to answer. Yet the desire for the comfort and independence a private car can bring won't be eliminated.

(三)、孩子的学习负担过重, 为何减轻不了? 有人认为学生以学为重, 没有负担不成才, 也有人认为, 在轻松的环境中, 学生也能成才, 谈谈自己的看法。(书包重, 作业多, 成绩好, 考名校, 学校以成绩好坏评价教师…) (关键词：under the pressure, score high, lighten children’s academic burden, crush, force)

　 作文范文：

　　　 In recent years, children’s schoolbags on their back are getting heavier and heavier. Their burden still can’t be relieved in spite of social protests. I think the factors for this case are complex.

　　　　　　　 There are several reasons for my viewpoint. For one thing, most parents want their children to be on the list of the top students, which requires children to perform more tasks and play less. Therefore, children are forced to crush their time to study more. For another, children

themselves under the pressure want to score high. They also want to get a golden opportunity of entering key schools and they think good marks can provide them with success.

　　　　 　Obviously, we can see that the problem about the enormous pressure on children won’t be lightened in a short time unless the pattern of Chinese education is changed.

[原创一]、竞争是我们生活中的一种普遍现象，竞争和合作是不可分的，它们永远是对紧密相连的孪生兄弟。谈谈你的观点。

[思路导航]本文为原因分析式议论文。写作时首先要进行全文构思，全文可分三段：一是两者的关系；二是举例说明两者不可分割的原因；最后阐明自己的观点。

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　　　　　　　 Ours is considered to be a very competitive society. It is a common phenomenon and also a motive force. Then, how should we understand the relationship between competition and cooperation? 　　　　 For example, there are 11 people in a football team and everyone has its individual skills. They make full use of their own skills to play it, but they can’t play it well and even lose it. Why does it happen? It is that they don’t cooperate with the other other that leads to failure. As a matter of fact, this example tells us many things. Competition gets along with cooperation and cooperation without competition will never obtain one’s goals and satisfy one’s needs. So does competition without cooperation. 　　　　 In my opinion, what we have to learn in life is to know when to be cooperative and when to be competitive. Only by competition and cooperation combined will it be good to us and lead to a success.

[亮点点击]本文构思巧妙，段落清晰，开端引人入胜，结尾绝妙。文中恰当运用了一些关联词语、高级词汇和短语，使文章衔接绝妙自然。如：then, for example, make full of, as a matter of fact, get along with, in my opinion, be good to, lead to等，以及强调句型，并列句，主语从句，倒装句等句式，更加增加了文章的可读性，提高了文章的档次。

(二)、我们用考试来衡量学生, 好吗? (检查学生所学,公正, 副作用, 应试. 能力不够, …)

(关键词：side effect, motivate, seek more knowledge, efficient and reliable, exam techniques, the standards of teaching)

　 作文范文：

　　　 In most schools and colleges the examination is used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in mastering a particular subject. Although it does the job quite efficiently，its side effects are also enormous.

　　　　　　　 The most undesirable effect is that examinations encourage bad study habits. As the examination score is the only criterion for his academic performance， a student is driven to memorize mechanically rather than to think creatively. Examinations do not motivate a student to seek more knowledge， but to restrict his reading； they do not enable him to study consistently throughout the semester， but to induce cramming during exam week. Examinations also lower the standards of teaching. Since teachers themselves are often judged by examination results，they are often judged by examination results， they are reduced to training their students in exam techniques. And no subjects can be taught successfully merely through being approached with intent to take examinations.

　　　　　　　 Actually，few of us admit that examinations can contribute anything really important to the students' academic development. If that's the case， why can't we make a change and devise something more efficient and reliable than examinations？

1.插入语

然而, 其他同学持有不同意见。

The other students, however, hold a different view.

另外，他们会以为将来可以依赖父母。

Besides, they’ll think they can rely on their parents in the future.

2. It 句型

我们期望今年有个好收成。

It is expected that there will be a good harvest.

30%学生认为无必要让孩子知道父母的收入。

30% of the students think it unnecessary to let children know how much their parents earn.

3. with 结构

作业做完了，那个男孩出去玩了。

With the homework finished, the boy went out to play.

有了父母可依赖，他们就不再努力学习了。

They’ll not study hard any more, with rich parents to depend on.

4.分词短语

30%同学不赞同这一看法， 认为孩子不应当…。

30% of my classmates disagree with it, saying children shouldn’t….

知道了这点，他们会越来越努力学习。

Knowing this, they’ll study harder and harder.

5.从句

他所做的一切使我们很失望。(主语从句)

What he did disappointed us all.

我们应当知道父母的收入，因为这有助于我们

理解他们的艰辛。(状语从句)

We should know parents’ income,because it’ll help us understand how hard they have to work.

6. 倒装句型

我们只有努力学习才能为社会作出自己的贡献.

Only by working hard can we make our contributions to our society in the future.

只有当我们意识到互相帮助的重要性,我们才能致力于建设一个和谐社会.

Only when we realize the importance of helping each other can we be devoted to building a harmonious society.　

7. 强调句型

当他到家以后才知道发生了什么事情.

It was not until he got home that he knew what had happened.

是他让我懂得了什么才是真正的互相帮助.

It was he that taught me what helping each other really meant.

常用句型：

There is( was) a ( are ) sb doing sth.

I saw (noticed , heard etc) sb doing. (do .done) sth.

I was watching TV when the telephone rang.

I was about to leave when a guest dropped in on me.

( On\ when )Seeing an old man in need of help I rusted to support him.

Having showed my friends around our school I took them to the park.

That’s what I saw (heard ,want to say ,want to do ,did ,have done. learned from this book \ story \ travel )

What impressed me most was that ….

过渡词：

first ---second –third –at last

first　 next　 then　 at last\ finally

but　 however　 while　 and　 so　 because

as long as　 on condition that

in spite of　 even if　 even though

What’s more ,　　 besides

That’s to say ,　　 in a word　 in short

As you know ,　 you see,　 in my opinion .

表示时间：

one day \ one Sunday morning \ on a sunny morning \ on a dark evening \ on sept 18^th 2004 \ some time ago \ some days ago.

表示感叹：

What an interesting lesson \ party \ film \ activities \ thing we have had \ saw \ did today!

What a brave boy he is! What a busy day it is!

We’ll do whatever we can to help those who are in need of help \ in great trouble \ disaster.

We will do our best to protect our environment from being polluted.

Animals are our friends so we must stop \ keep \ prevent people from killing them.

I am looking forward to your good news \ your coming \ having a cellphone of my own \ getting your letter.　 Take actions from now \ ourselves.

How important to learn the knowledge we need.

How important it is to protect our environment\ earth!

表示比例：one half of the students \ half of the students, one third of the students \ two \ fifth of the people \ most \ many \ some \ few \ no people; 30percent of the people. a great number of \ the majority of the people

全品高考网H. 2010年高考书面表达演练

指导性写作和开放性写作相结合的形式将是高考考查的一个趋势。更利于考查考生的真实的写作水平。切近学生生活实际，关注现实生活，让学生有话可说，有理可论是08高考命题的方向。题材会突出时代精神和实用特色，其更适合新课标理念；地域特色，地方特色将会变得越来越浓厚。对学生文化素质的要求更高，同时对语言表达能力的要求更高。考生必须注意开放式作文的训练，除了具备扎实的语言知识，同时，训练审题、立意、选材、把握要点的能力及综合语言运用的能力是获得高分的关键。题材上更注重：真情、爱心、亲情，其乐融融；开心、幽默、友谊，地久天长；智慧、启迪篇、、

以下分为三中方式展示：图表式、要点式

全品高考网图表式

(一)看图作文：

[原创]1．仔细观察下边这幅漫画，请用英语写一篇120-150左右的短文，简要描述漫画内容，并结合生活实际，简要说明你对漫画内涵的理解，题目自拟。参考词汇：夕阳无限好the “Sunset is of infinite beauty”；人生历程a life process

　

[思路导航]本文具有很强的开放性，可分三个方面描述，一是谈少年时源于一种对生命的好奇与挥霍，老希望把时间前移；。二是老年感慨于“夕阳无限好”，希望时间为自己倒流，抓住生命的美丽，弥补人生的遗憾。三是对两种想法的理解和感想(两种愿望都是人之常情，但又是不可实现的，所以要把握当下，珍惜人生的每个过程；以一种平和、坦然的心态面对时间的流逝。)写作时，一定要抓住要点，描写准确，简明扼要；在写看法时，紧绕主题。

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One possible version:

As is shown in the picture, time is a life process that can't go against. When we in childhood, we always wish time moves faster and faster with the curiosity and overspending of the life while during the agedness we start to plaint the infinite beauty of the “Sunset is of infinite beauty”, hoping that the time would flow backwards so as to catch hold of the beauty of life and make up for the regrets. Of course, these two wishes are our natural and common humanities/feelings, but could not be achieved. Personally (In my opinion), we should focus on our current life, cherish each (and every) process of our life from now on and face the flight of time with a peaceful and calm attitude upon the collapsing of the time. (…upon the time’s passing/going by.)

[亮点点击]本文有效地组织并运用了所列出的信息，描写准确到位，词语精练，用词准确。尤其是作者恰当地运用了说明事实的一般现在时、多种句式等，使文章更加生动，流畅。适当运用了高级词汇和短语，如：as is shown, while, flow backwards, so as to, catch hold of, make up for, personally, focus on…等，以及定语从句，非谓语，并列句等，增加了文章的亮点，提高了文章的档次。

2．Tom 的署假过完了，他惊异于时光的飞逝。三个月他是怎么度过的呢？闲聊和上网，他真后悔，他要弥补。但当他重新坐在电脑前时，他又忘了自己的诺言。请用语言描述这四幅画并发表看法。词数不少于60。

　

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

[思路导航]

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One possible version:

　　　 Tom is shocked to find three months’ summer vacation has flown away from him. He wonders what he has been doing during such a long time. Then he remembers the days which he spent talking and laughing nonstop with his friends and the websites which he hung on surfing day and night. He regrets having wasted his time this way. But you see, when he sits in front of the computer again, he immediately becomes a crazy bull once more. Addiction is really hard to shake off.

2. 尤其当父母有足够的钱养家时，

Especially when their parents have enough

money to support the family,….

句首副词举例

unbelievably

especially

frequently

strangely

unexpectedly

surprisingly

besides

1. 这极有可能使孩子养成依赖父母的习惯

Probably this will make the children

develop the habit of living on parents.

3. 这有助于我们学会节俭。

This helps us learn to be thrifty

置于句首的副词

2. 我们就会了解父母的辛苦工作。

We’ll then know about parents’ hardship

1.这件事情挺难的。

This is a challenging job.