Step 2. Write the Short sentences using the key words and expressions above

Step1. List the key words and expressions:___________________________.

4. 你的启示。(可以用谚语)

写作要求：只能用5个句子（不包括已给出的部分）表达全部的内容。

参考词汇：迈克尔.菲尔普斯Michael Phelps；马利兰州巴尔的摩市 Baltimore, Maryland ；非凡的extraordinary..蝶泳butterfly。

3． 在北京奥林匹克运动会， ?菲尔普斯实现了他的8枚金牌梦，打破了7个世界纪录，创造了历史。

2. 他7岁开始游泳,经历了许多艰苦的训练。15岁的时候，他参加了2000年奥运会，并在200米蝶泳比赛中排名第五。据报道，他是这次次奥运会中自1932年以来竞争的最年轻的男性选手。

1. 米高.?菲尔普斯是美国一位非凡的游泳运动员。1985年6月30日出生于美国马利兰州巴尔的摩市。

①   Recently, I watched Touch China 2005 on TV and was deep moved by the story of Hong Zhanhui who was born in Henan Province in 1982. ②When he was 12, his father got mental disease and one day brought home a abandoned new-born girl. ③^ A year later，His  mother, suffering from the heavy burden, deserted the family and Hong began to shoulder the responsibility for taking care of his little sister and sick father. ④Hong, who loved school and studied hard, finally was admitted to college, but he took his sister with him and continue to care for her.^ ⑤Personally, I hold the view which there are many good qualities in Hong worth our learning, his sense of responsibility, courage and above all, a loving heart.

Task V. Practise Basic writing 基础写作实战演练

目的：强化写作技巧，实战运用技巧，限时训练，当堂完成写作。

写作内容：题目：Great Swimmer Michael Phelps

3.      The qualities are his sense of responsibility, courage and above all a loving heart.

Sentence5:____________________________________________________________目的：将合成的5个长句连成一篇文章，以学案的形式发给学生，让学生找出该文的时态错误、人称问题、搭配问题，以及在分析句与句之间的逻辑关系的基础上，适当地加上连接小词：如第2句和第3句间可添上what’s worse,在4句和第5句间加上To our delight等.

Task IV group work: make the passage perfect

Step 1: Divide the passage into two or three paragraphs

Step 2: Correct the mistakes in it

Step 3: Add the proper words or expressions between the sentences to make it coherent(连贯).

2.      There are  many good qualities in Hong worth our learning, his sense of responsibility, courage and above all a loving heart.

1.      Personally, I hold the view.